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  • Jun. 19th, 2007 at 12:05 PM
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Following is a poem that [info]artmunow wrote for me, using bits of entries i wrote, rearranged and put back together. there were two, but i like this one the best. :P the other, can be found here.
CHEERS DUDE!! :D
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1.

she wonders if i’ll ever find a home on a wall, or get to fuck some
really good art that’s already hung – i know that curling up in her
mellows me, but i’m hugely purple and that’s scary – and my face
doesn’t always work; it stops time when i eat a muffin’s silk -

i actually panic, like i’m gonna be recognized as just a bunch
of puter-bits, and not a quiet art formed without answers to
big questions – but i think i’ve found myself, or at least painted
my self into a corner where art ranges free, and numbers are just
symbol-shapes drawn from imaginary, sometimes alarming facts -

those are the things that dance our space away in response to music,
so i’ve given the day an ultimatum: close your mind, and open all
of our identities, because they can’t…and be the question that fucks
with the academics.

Comments

[info]lucy_lumpkins wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2007 06:53 am (UTC)
tell you what, i haven't read or written a poem since school finished :D
[info]zaliness wrote:
Jul. 20th, 2007 07:42 am (UTC)
lol.
aaaaaaaages ago, tis true.
was it worth it? :P
[info]lucy_lumpkins wrote:
Jul. 20th, 2007 12:17 pm (UTC)
um... i can't remember !!!! remember me? :P
[info]zaliness wrote:
Jul. 25th, 2007 04:52 am (UTC)
nope.
:P

theres no clue to who you are on your journal.
hint?
[info]lucy_lumpkins wrote:
Jul. 25th, 2007 11:48 am (UTC)
it's really a surprise! you'll never guess!!
[info]zaliness wrote:
Jul. 30th, 2007 03:55 am (UTC)
the pope?
[info]lucy_lumpkins wrote:
Jul. 30th, 2007 01:02 pm (UTC)
i'm leni :)
lol but sure call me the pope!
[info]artmunow wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2007 07:37 pm (UTC)
3:15PM - because you Kerr

there are fools to young to tell secrets, but
their foolishness attracts us; they suffer us.

in bed, in gray light, her cold crack can't refuse;
it grabs our fears and burns the half-eaten children.

they scream for us to give back what we’ve taken,
but the priestess piles more moments on our seed.

kneeling, he prays for the great stick of god to prick
the moon, allowing her to slip inside.

his face is blue from clutching her light - she feeds
on his vanishing flame before working him to tears.

the child in him cries for less; it wants a tongue to
blunt her words, not twist prayers into silver rubbings…

there are times when death hides our honey in rags,
swallowing us like water made poems.

we whisper to them softly thru closed doors, until
our shadows suddenly know all that we’ve wished.

rejectedphoenix wrote:
Jun. 23rd, 2007 01:03 am (UTC)
lol
lol. i always knew poetry was retarded. now i have proof :P
[info]zaliness wrote:
Jul. 19th, 2007 03:32 am (UTC)
Re: lol
i think its funny.
i was hugely purple, lol.
rejectedphoenix wrote:
Jul. 20th, 2007 03:53 am (UTC)
Re: lol
nah. it was just crap. didnt make sense. just some loser with no life and no sense of artistic wordsmithing :P
[info]zaliness wrote:
Jul. 20th, 2007 07:41 am (UTC)
Re: lol
you would think so, lol.
what would you classify as artistic wordsmithing?

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